My notes
Strengths
My strengths in my article include; my detailed writing of the answers I received.
Improvements
based on the feedback I am going to edit my article I am going to research other popular article for example the New York Times A 'wicked' tearful talk with Cynthia Eviros and Ariana Grande.
Once I had a better understand article conventions I altered my article so that it was clear what questions I was asking and who was answering me.
I've added a fake website link to promote a made up art competition, the made up competition prize is teased on my front cover.
I also improved my grammar and pacing.
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